The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Love this, love this, love this! Wonderful, wonderful phrases, awesome poetic structure, everything just perfect. The only thing I'd change (purely personal preference) would be to eliminate the single letters before each stanza. This is absolutely gorgeous!
08/12/06
Very original. One of my favs
08/12/06
Took alot of thought to create this masterpiece of poetic rhyme - and without the Letters of "V","I","S", etc. preceding each stanza, I don't believe I would have seen it - at least not immediately. Great Job! no...an Excellent job! Kudos.
08/15/06
Any time you can work the phrase venting spleens into a work it is good. Great job.
08/15/06
WOW! I love it! Wonderful images!
Wow! This is really good. It must have taken alot of work.
08/15/06
Very clever. Nice job. God Bless.
08/16/06
Yep, I love it. An enjoyable read showing terrific imagination and creativity. Congratulations on a job well done.
08/16/06
Did I ever LOVE this - your poetic structure is amazing and your images varied and stunning. What a piece! Amazingly wonderful!