The Official Writing Challenge
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There were bits and pieces of several Bible stories and characters here, so I was confused at first. I think that someone unfamiliar with those stories would enjoy this legend quite a bit; it reads almost like a fairy tale.
I liked the way you tied in the Bible story. Good job.
How come I didnt see that word backwards was Vision? ARgh! Enjoyed it.
Neat story - but my vision is failing as I didn't see the Noisiv as Vision either. But interesting story for fairy tale lovers. Nice approach to week's Topic.
I agree with Jan - all the different bits and pieces of different bible stories (along with all the different backward bible names) did make me feel like I was trying to figure out who this was about. Once I let go of that, however, I really did enjoy this! Very nicely written!