The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Very good; each stanza with its own well-articulated theme, and a consistent structure throughout.
08/12/06
Makes alot of sense! Food for thought and nicely done.
"If I could see as God sees..." Could there be a more important vivion? Nice work!
08/15/06
It looks as if you put hard work into this. I enjoyed it very much. I also like how hard you worked to keep it in line with the theme. (Not just a passing glance but a full work on vision.)
08/15/06
Nicely done. Made me stop and think. :)
This is beautiful. And such a good message. I hope you did more with this from here.