The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
I had to read this one three times to decide how I felt, and I finally came to--I love it! My initial issue was with Mack's monolog--it didn't quite sound like the way a real guy would talk. But I changed my mind--it's foreshadowed by the word "monolog" in the first sentence and by the sounds of the ocean waves, and Mack is wonderfully articulate. Yep, I love this one.
08/12/06
Very, very good. Also, very wise, very observant and extremely truthful! Loved it!
Written like a pro.
08/14/06
An interesting piece. Nicely done.
08/14/06
I liked the style of this - short sentences and quick paced thoughts brought to a good closure. Nice!
08/14/06
I enjoyed this very much. It's why I like to read, to be moved by a writers passion. Very short, crisp descriptive writing. It was very honest and emotional. Well done, very well done!!!
God Bless.
08/15/06
Vivid, clear dialogue made for an interesting read. Bravo!
I was able to see everything. As a reader this is a great read.
08/15/06
Very nice read. Well done! :)
08/16/06
Great description! You paint so many different pictures that were wonderful to see. I really enjoyed this!!