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08/10/06
This story will be reassuring to those who miss loved ones who have died.

It was a bit off-putting to me that God was referred to as "glowing being" "object," and "spirit"--it made me unsure at times if it was, indeed, God.

I like the idea of a persistent vision.

08/13/06
This was an easy-to-read story. The ending was probably too perfect, almost like a fairy-tale ending. I also agree that if the "Being" was God, then you should have called Him God -- it was almost as if you were afraid to identify Him as God. If you're sharing a vision like this, don't be afraid to ascribe to Him His identity. Nice story otherwise. :)