The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
A heartfelt and personal devotional and testimony--well done!

From a writerly standpoint, be careful of using key words too often in close proximity. For example, in the first paragraph, you use "pain" or "painful" 5 times in 4 sentences.

Your second paragraph was particularly moving. Thank you so much for sharing.
08/10/06
A very nice Devotional for those adjusting to a new life and new circumstances. Nicely written, but could use an anecdote here or there to perk up the interest; however, Good Job!