The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
As a pastor's work is never done, also should we always be working for the Lord. Nicely written, but needs spacing between paragraphs. Thanks for writing.
08/08/06
Several things I like here, and then there is room for improvement, of course. I like the begining, the view the 2 year old. Liked your discription of granpa and grama. Like the message in the story. Wish you would have written the entire thing from the 2 year old's prespective since you started it that way.