The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/06
Very good you really spoke volumes about what "work for God" is about. Ultimately everything we do is for His Glory. Overall well put together, I did notice a couple of mistakes and the spelling of "secular" at the end was incorrect. Being in advance I didn't think errors were made :)
08/03/06
Oh yes I forgot one other thing, please open up paragraphs for readability (add a space). I don't think that is too much to ask.
08/05/06
Nice message in this. Spacing between paragraphs made readability easier. Overall, nicely done (a few typos and some needed punctuation).