The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Ineresting - I read it through 2x to grasp the meaning. I like this line: traveled a month farther into the wilderness. Nice descriptions. The last sentence has 'another' 2x in a row.
08/05/06
At first I thought this the story of Jonah; then I began to think perhaps it was Elijah when he ran to the desert. But neither of these seemed Biblically familiar - so I gave up my assumptions to concentrate on WHY the old man was running, and from What? And what did his work consist of? ...the story keeps running through my mind like a mystery. Perhaps a footnote of Scripture might have clued me in; What WAS his work? And what was His purpose? However, very well written and intriguing!
08/10/06
Way to go Tim! Excelent job. God bless.