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08/04/06
A well crafted poem.
I loved your poem!
08/06/06
GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP
GOD BLESS YOU
08/07/06
I really loved the structure of this poem, and the aha! moment at the end when the reader is given the tie-in to the topic. Beautiful job.
08/07/06
I don't usually comment on poetry, but this was so good I read it aloud to my husband. Rhythm, rhyme, and meter seemed to work well together. The message was the most important thing! Bless you for allowing the Lord to give us His message!
Well done! I liked the single lines set by themselves. :-)
08/07/06
Mastercrafting at its best!!
08/07/06
Very nicely done. I like the repetition of the last lines of the stanzas.
08/07/06
VERY powerful. The individual lines set apart are EXTREMELY effective in creating just the mood needed for this piece. Wonderful!
08/07/06
Great poem - I love the structure, and the isolated near-repeats were very effective. Powerful writing.
08/07/06
Very well done. I hope you will find additional ways to share this wonderful piece of writing with others. Great job!
08/07/06
A very effective and powerful poem. I really like this. Wonderful job!
Wonderful job! :)
08/09/06
Wonderful - what more is there to say?
11/13/06
Please come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/