The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/06
This is a neat little story! Little Johnny is a delightful little boy - you seemed to capture him quite well. I enjoyed this.
Lovely story. Little Johnny's eagerness to hear everything his wise grandfather has to say comes across really well.
Try and get some spacing in to break up the paragraphs - this will make it a much easier read.