The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so well written that I just can't believe more haven't commented! I especially liked where you had God talking about all the times we take credit for His work! It really made me think how many times did I do that?
02/23/05
You brought out the focus on selfishness very well and allowed the reader to see that God knows all our efforts and He rewards us in good time. Well written and well crafted.