The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
I think you've managed to encompass every possible reader! Nice work, you captured the topic!
Yes, you certainly have written a comprehensive piece on selfishness... I feel my conscience pricked for sure! Good work. I believe that you meant to use the word "ensued" where you used "pursued", but all in all, a very good piece of writing.
What a great piece. You captured the humaness in the character, she wasn't mean or spiteful, just didn't get the priorities right. So much food for thought here.
02/24/05
So many of us have been through this not having enough time. So much loneliness could be avoided if we would only give some of our time to others. Well told story.