The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/13
You did a very good job of creating intrigue that drew me in immediately.

You used the topic well in your entry. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end.

Good writing. Thanks.
05/07/13
Excellent title for this heart felt story. I love animals and you captured the love God has for our furry friends that God has placed here on this earth for us to care for. A very warm and heart felt story. I truly enjoyed reading it and the outcome was simply Great.
Oh I love this story. You did a delightful job from the very beginning to the end. I often don't get surprised by a twist but I must say I never imagined that the character in the beginning was a puppy. You did a fantastic job.
Congratulations on placing 4 in your level and 31 overall!