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Topic: Current Affairs (06/08/12)
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TITLE: World Economic Woes | Previous Challenge Entry
By Reid Ashbaucher
06/08/12 -
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Some suggestions would be to find a good proofreader to catch some of the errors like bankrupt instead of bankrupted and no-no instead of no, no. You may also want to have short paragraphs and double-space between them.
You definitely covered the topic with this piece. The economy is something that impacts almost everyone. I also enjoyed the Bible verses (make sure you include the translation) you used. They were perfect match for your message Good job.