The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
I truly enjoyed this clever entry that was perfectly delightful. It was on topic and had a powerful message.

Nicely done. God bless~
05/20/12
I've always been fascinated by the story of Enoch. I was a little confused at the end. I thought (until I re-read it) that Kerry was the mother in the park, but then I realized he was the evangelist. I think it would have ended better before you told about Kerry going on stage. Interesting story. Keep writing!
This is a different story. I enjoyed the uniqueness of it. You did a nice job of setting the scene and painting a picture in my head.