The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
"This Time Around" or "Second Time Around"?? are what came to me for a title :) I had to read this twice it was so good! (our 2nd is Joshua also :)
08/17/05
Joshua Jordan would have been a good enough title.
Quite a good entry.
Good work. I have a Joshua also. Thanks for sharing your talent.
08/18/05
Guess I am limited, I could not pull it together and understand what you were trying to get across.
I didn't understand the message either. I felt it was unclear