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Very sad and moving. It's real, what you've described here. This happens today; something that most people try to ignore. Technically speaking: you took me into the story and made me feel it all. Thanks.
Very sad. Very, very sad. It gives a real picture of what went on, and what still goes on- and I liked that. Alot of times today, people-Christians especially-like to overlook some more 'unpleasant' things. Things like you just wrote about. You nailed it on the head. Awesome story.
Great writing! Captivating and sad story.
Superb writing.
This line: "..ugly black spider, haloed in a white circle floating in a sea of red blood.." Very clever! Well done. Hope this places.
WOW - so captivating and eye-opening! You a marvelous job of painting this picture for the reader. I was engrossed until the end!
What a poignant picture you painted,you grabbed my attention and held on!! Fantastic writing!
A very difficult read, but a powerful story about such a horrific time in history.
Excellent writing. But even your writing pales in comparison to the details you so profoundly shared in a way that grips the very soul of the reader. My Lord and my God ... forgive us for taking our freedom for granted -- we don't know how blessed we are!

Thank you for sharing this powerful story. Thank you!