The Official Writing Challenge
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Great devotional! very good writing. I liked your opening paragraph and you pulled it all together nicely at the end. I think because of the style this could be punched up abit for more reader interest but if you are submitting it somewhere as a basic devotional it is good.:)
The game that comes to mind is Jenga. I liked how you asked the question and then allowed the reader to think about it. Your intro paragraph really grabbed this reader's attention and illustrated your point beautifully. I thought you concluded very well also. In between, I would like to have seen more specific real life examples perhaps woven in a story to demonstrate your point. Good job!