The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/06
You have a very special calling and a very special story to tell here. Not everyone can take on the monumental parenting God gave you.

As to the writing, it would help if you watched your tenses throughout. Often you are past tense and then change to present. Watch subject-verb agreement too. Consider taking the story of Cindy and making the article just about her..,with dialogue and by doing that - you will draw the reader in more.

Shorten your first paragraph and sprinkle it with some action or dialogue. Then jump into the struggles of her life and how your confidence and faith grew because of the challenge. You have a great opportunity to share.Hope this helps!!:)