The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very well written piece. It kept my interest from the very beginning. Well done.
What a beautiful finish to an otherwise sad story. Thank you for sharing. Nicely done.
Wonderful tribute to a young woman trying to help others whilst dealing with her own pain. Very nicely written.
Chills and tears. This is an excellently written piece and reads well. Thank you for sharing this.
Excellent! My daughter's name is shelly and so it caught my eye. I love the twists and unexpected endings. Very sad but very hopeful. Each of your sentences moved the story forward and kept me sitting on the bed with her.