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08/03/06
This was a very well written piece. It kept my interest from the very beginning. Well done.
08/03/06
What a beautiful finish to an otherwise sad story. Thank you for sharing. Nicely done.
Wonderful tribute to a young woman trying to help others whilst dealing with her own pain. Very nicely written.
08/07/06
Chills and tears. This is an excellently written piece and reads well. Thank you for sharing this.
08/08/06
Excellent! My daughter's name is shelly and so it caught my eye. I love the twists and unexpected endings. Very sad but very hopeful. Each of your sentences moved the story forward and kept me sitting on the bed with her.