The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/06
Has a great message here, but needs a little work on the flow and the rhythm. Keep at it...practice makes perfect.
08/07/06
Good message here, but I would like to have seen more of the "Man" described and how you followed Him. A bit song-song, but lost near the end. Overall, I like this.