The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Compelling story - I really enjoyed this! The ending is WONDERFUL - I especially loved "Lottie heard the wind whisper through the leaves. Forgive." - and your very last paragraph.
07/28/06
A good story. A beautiful prayer and a wonderful ending. Very well done.
07/30/06
I like the picture you painted of forgiveness. Wonderful writting, wonderful story.