The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/06
Very inventive. This is nice. I don't know why you don't have any comments??! Enjoyed it.
Not a bad story at all... very engaging and an inventive take on this week's topic. I enjoyed it (and even left a comment :)). Thank you for sharing.
Yes, I agree---
This is very well written!
Great job!
08/01/06
Creative, held my attention from beginning to end. Great story!
08/01/06
Wonderful story - I love the contrast between the world outside and that in that little haven. Enough to give anyone hope. Very well done!
08/02/06
Very nice! Interesting how the story 'unfolded'.
08/02/06
Very ceative, informative story. Kept my attention. A wonderful job.
08/02/06
Very ceative, informative story. Kept my attention. A wonderful job.
Good job at showing God in the midst of sin. Great entry!
08/02/06
I really liked this. Good take on walk topic. Your writing was very descriptive and brought me into the sights and sounds and smells of the city. I was one missing word towards the end, but other than that this is superb writing. Good job!
08/02/06
OOPS! My bad!...I meant to say 'There was one missing word....'