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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Walk (07/20/06)

TITLE: LET GO, LET GOD
By Monique Fox
07/26/06


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Let go of your walk with the Devil and sin
Let God enter your life and save your soul within

Let go of bigotry, prejudice, and hate
Let God's love and kindness set you straight

Let go of your worries and concern
Let God be your comforter and relief that you yearn

Let go, take a deep cleansing breath and release
Let God be your holy officer, your spiritual police

Let go of your headaches, tension, and stress
Let God calm you and clean up your daily mess

Let go of negativity
Let God be your positivity

Let go of your frown
Let God turn your frown upside down

Let go of those things that give you trouble
Let God inflate your life and be your helium, your air, your balloon, your bubble

Let go of impurities of drugs, cigarettes, pork or swine
Let God be your filter for all things divine

Let go lying, cheating, stealing, and sin
Let God open new doors for you to come in

Let go, let God
And his angels be your glorious squad
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Steve Uppendahl 08/02/06
Poetry is not my area, but I liked the simplicity of this work. You've done a good job. A few of your rhymes were pushing things just a bit (frown/upside down--something a bit more original here would've been nice).

But, I liked the emotion and message behind the words. I also liked how you kept an even theme throughout your piece.

Nicely done.