The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
07/29/06
LOVED the Title and the first stanza! Just Super! Then all of a sudden it lost it's excellent Rhythm & Rhyme and ended up with...well, ah..just plain prose. That's only one person's opinion, so not to worry - free verse folks will love it! Just not my cup of tea. But thanks for the fantastic title, etc. Reeled me in like a sitting duck. Good job.