The Official Writing Challenge
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Needs a Footnote here with the Bible Scripture; so that those who are not familiar with this bible story can read it for themselves; and even I have forgotten where to look. Thanks for such a great story of old; that never gets too old to hear over and over again. Loved it. Great Job.
Nicely done. One suggestion--you might want to break out the quote "I can walk . . ." as an additional paragraph. This is a powerful statement and it would draw more attention to it. I always enjoy reading stories that bring the scripture to life. Thanks for sharing.