The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Wow! This is such a cute piece. Loved the message. I kinda wished that she would have been walking with Jesus instead of Gab, though.
07/28/06
Loved it! Sure kept my interest from beginning to end! One itsy bitsy goof "were" chatting by their mailboxes instead of "where"...but because it was such a great story, I kinda overlooked it; Great Read and very nicely written. It perked up my day.
08/02/06
I liked this story very much--very create take on the subject. Noticed in the first paragraph "site" should have been "sight." Nice story--kept me moving along with it.
08/02/06
Great story...kinda makes me take notice of my own pre-conceived notions about people I don't really "know" -- they could be praying for me! AND, it moves me to pray for those around me...I don't know what might be going on in their lives...Edna could be anywhere!!

Thanks for the inspiration. Loved it.
Very cute! Can picture this as a play or a television show. The charcters really came to life. Nicely done.
08/03/06
Well done on being highly commended - your writing just seems to improve with every entry! This was a lovely story with wonderfully crafted characters. God bless!