The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Such a precious way of expressing our walk on earth with God. Loved every word and every line - it is so true to life! Really enjoyed this, and it brought me comfort and peace. Good job!
07/30/06
I liked your thoughts at the beginning, and your poem was beautiful. I'm not sure you need the beginning with the poem though - it could definitely stand alone.

Very well-written, loved the poem, and I feel blessed for having read it. Thank you!