The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Such beautiful heartfelt thoughts - that reaches into the very soul of every Christian; very touching and nicely done. Kudos!
07/20/06
"How I long to open my mouth
In the wisdom of God
That would touch people"

Your heart's in the right place, dear writer. With that as your motivation, God will make use of your words for His glory.
07/20/06
p.s. Did you leave out punctuation on purpose? Just curious, since "free verse" is a pretty "free" means of expression :)
07/20/06
I agree that some punctuation would enhance this poem, but I really appreciate this journey through the history of our faith, and then through the history of your narrator's faith.
07/20/06
Bravo! Good word pictures. Nicely done.