The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Great writing! Great dialogue! Fantastic story! The Dinner Debate was super, but the ending? The bedtime scene was the Whipped Cream Topping on the Strawberries!
Super job!
07/20/06
Very impressive--a lesson in apologetics, disguised (and quite well) as a short story! Great job.
07/20/06
Good questions! You are a very expressive writer and I enjoyed reading this and chuckling over how clever it all came together. Another unique--and essential--perspective on "soul."
07/20/06
Excellent from main course to dessert! You definitely gave your readers something to chew on! Sorry for the pun. Just wanted to make sure you got your just desserts! God bless! Well done!
07/21/06
Very engaging - a good use of dad's thought process, too. Clever! :)
07/26/06
Loved the game - a brilliant way for dad to get the message across.