The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
One small suggestion here - it would be more of an impact if broken up into smaller paragraphs. I call it being more Reader Friendly. Good thoughts, however.
07/20/06
I really like this kind of first person devotional, which I think works so much better than second person. Some specific examples from your life would give it even more "punch."
07/20/06
In your writing you lay bare your soul, exposing the pain, the weariness, the desperation. For a writer, none of this experience is wasted; it is material for the book God is writing through your life, and material you can use to help others along the way. Instead of writing ABOUT the word "soul," you have revealed it. Bravo!
07/20/06
I agree with what has already been said. Also, towards the end, did you notice that it started to rhyme? You might even be able to create a poem out of this inspirational piece.