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07/20/06
The story of the two men in church is the heart of your piece--I wonder if you should have started with that? Your first paragraph has some awkward pronoun issues...but the body of this piece is just full of grace, and I'm so glad that you shared it with us.
07/21/06
Powerful article - nicely done. Good ending.
07/21/06
Great devotional and such a sweet story of God's love in the midst of a storm. Thanks for sharing.
07/22/06
Thanks for sharing this touching story of this couple and the way God used Bill to come over and lend a helping (lifting) hand. There was a quiet grace in the way you told this story and I am glad to have had the opportunity to read it.
07/22/06
What an awesome privilege God gave you in allowing you to see that sacrifice of praise and encouraging act. Thanks for sharing it with us.
07/26/06
Wonderful testimony of the power of "small things." YOu did a wonderful job of weaving together the real-life experience and scripture. Other than echoing the comments Jan made, I have no suggestions for you!