Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Win A Publishing Package HERE            

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Soul (07/13/06)

TITLE: The Secret Place
By Mitzi Busby
07/17/06


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

A familiar smell permeated the room, filling up all of the spaces within and without. It was like the smell of early morning dew or freshly fallen rain. The sweet incense delighted my senses as a thick cloud of light enveloped the room. Electrical impulses shot through every cell in my body as I felt the presence of God all around me. The lights in the room were emeralds, blues, and reds filtering through the rainbow of light. The peace was still and calm like a gentle breeze or still waters. My spirit, heart and soul were communing with My Creator, worshipping before Him in awe of His overwhelming presence. Humbly, I bowed and absorbed all of Him that was possible. In the presence of the King, I listened quietly and remained still as He spoke to my heart. A warmth and joy like I have never know rose up all around me and took my breath away. His anointing flowed like a river over me as the Holy Spirit breathed in me His purpose. The tingling sensation pulsed through my face, hands and feet, witnesses of His presence and touch. He spoke, “Peace, be still, My Child. All is well. I have engraved your name in the palm of My hand. You are held in My grip. Only Trust Me and see if I will not make a way for you.” With tears of joy streaming down my face, I rose and went my way, knowing by faith that everything that I had entrusted to Him was kept safely for me.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 819 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Jan Ackerson 07/20/06
Wow, I feel as if I've peeked into a very personal quiet time...thanks for that glimpse.
Virginia Gorg07/21/06
Very well done. You said much in a short space. thank you. :)
Lisa Vest07/21/06
Thank you for writing this. No other piece I've ever read on FW has ever touched my heart like this. This truly was God talking to me. Thank you, thank you! What a beautiful description of the power and presence of God.
Phyllis Inniss 07/22/06
The way God touches us is awesome and you've been touched by the Holy Spirit. Many would like to feel His presence in such a powerful way. It just leaves the reader refreshed. Thank you for sharing.
Mishael Witty07/22/06
This was a wonderfully detailed description of a rather intangible experience. Beautifully done.
Barbara Thompson-Young09/18/07
Mitzi! You are so expressive with your heart! I've experienced these moments, too, so I can identify with you in this. Treasures from heaven, these moments are. I pray you are well, thinking of you often.
Stay focused on Jesus! I know you will. He's so awesome, and He flows through your words.