The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Well, I'm really laughing at myself, because the whole time I was reading this, I was thinking, "No one would act this way!" And then you whammied me with your ending--well done.
07/21/06
Great ending to this. I was thinking how rude this person was, but then, how often am I rude to Christ. Yikes! hits home. Nicely done.
07/22/06
Nice. Good message that we all need to be reminded of from time to time. I love how you made the "dream" seem so real, since they often do seem that way in real life.
07/26/06
Well done - so well in fact, that I am leaving now to spend a little more time with an important Guest. Good job.
Good job & writing skills
Great story! I personally thought the last two paragraphs were unnecessary, but otherwise great job and great point!