The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Beautiful, beautiful free verse, with gorgeous images. I love it!
07/20/06
Beautiful! Nicely done!
Oh,yes, beautiful imagery of the desert and the life giving Water! I like how you carried it all the way through this heart mirroring poem too. This spoke straight to my heart. So many times throughout life we do experience the thirst of our Lord in difficult experiences!! Beautiful!
07/22/06
An awesome reminder that the Living Water is the only thing that satisfies. Thanks for sharing your interpretation of this verse.
Cool images! Loved the last stanza, especially. I'm refreshed!!!

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08/02/06
Your expressive writing makes this reader thirsty. You have certainly captured the essence of your subject in these choice verses. This is a most satisfying read, especially since we reach refreshment at poem's end.