The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
This poem has some great images--I really like the hummingbird who is "viciously alive." I was very confused at first about who was being addresses, but there was a really cool "aha" moment at the end. Good job.
07/21/06
Well done, and I love the ending. :) Easy to read and quite descriptive.
07/22/06
This was a beautiful piece of writing and an interesting perspective on the soul.