The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
A lovely psalm...there is serenity in the repeated phrase.

I wonder if the last two lines of each stanza would be more effective if they were more nearly equal in length.

Thanks for including the references that inspired your updated psalm.
07/22/06
I love the line "Your right hand upholds me from the zoo." How true! Thanks for sharing.
07/25/06
A powerful devotional! Touching and well written.