The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
This is a very inspiring testimony, and I commend you for sharing it. Very moving.

From a writer's point of view, take a look at the number of sentences you have that begin with "I..." That's the challenge of writing in first person--finding new sentence structures.

You did a marvelous job of setting the scene, and connenting the darkeness of your apartment with the darkness of your soul. Good job!
07/20/06
I thought this was very well done. "Soul makeover"--liked that one. Loved the last line, too.
07/21/06
Very well done, thanks for sharing. Good testimony. (Check one word - sever - I think you meant "severe.")
07/22/06
Thank you for sharing your testimony. I love hearing how God works in people's lives. You don't have to make sure of anything, though. Nothing you, or anyone else, can do will separate you from God's love - ever! (see Romans 8:38-39). God bless.