The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
Free verse - or do they call it prose...either way, since it is not exactly my cup of tea I'm not qualified to give a critique; but there are some very beautiful thoughts within this piece. Keep up the good work. God Bless.
07/17/06
I like the pattern established by the last line of each stanza. The rest of this reads almost like stream-of-consciousness, with some lovely words and phrases.
I'm not a great fan of poetry but I really enjoyed this. There was something beautiful and moving about it that really touches the reader's heart. Keep writing!