The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
Ah yes, to quote Joyce Kilmer - "poems are made by fools like me, but only God can make a tree". Very nicely done; however, one small suggestion ... It's difficult doing a First Person story - so think of "other" ways aside from using the "I" word to begin the first three paragraphs. Good job. I liked it.
07/17/06
Well-written devotional, with a pleasant voice. Good job.
07/17/06
Wonderful devotional and reminder of how we can see God if we stop long enough. I liked this.
07/17/06
How wonderful! I love seeing God all around us. You found Him in a tree. Great entry!
:-)
07/17/06
Great devotional!
07/17/06
Nature truely does sing of the wonders of our God. When we listen, we hear it. Thanks for the reminder.
07/18/06
I loved the picture you painted here. This was a good devotional that you should submit somewhere. Very nice writing - it flowed and the message was clear.
I agree with what's been said this is a dynamic devotional. (;
07/18/06
A wonderful testimony of setting aside time to enjoy the Creator in his creation and to bask in His love for you. Well done.
Thank you. God used your entry to speak to me-keeping the Sabbath Holy.