The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/06
I absolutely love this poem. Some of the best imagery that I've read here.
Very nice. I rarely write poetry, so I am by no means an expert, but this is very well done.

You did a great job using powerful short words (cordoned, scarred, inflamed, etc.) throughout your poem. They make a great impact on the reader.

I was surprised that each line was capitalized. For some reason, it distracted me a bit.

Excellent poem.
07/19/06
I found it interesting how you started with paragraph form and then went to poetic stanzas. It worked well. Good work.
02/21/08
You have an amazing ability to convey the working of the Holy Spirit in just a few words!