The Official Writing Challenge
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I absolutely love this poem. Some of the best imagery that I've read here.
Very nice. I rarely write poetry, so I am by no means an expert, but this is very well done.

You did a great job using powerful short words (cordoned, scarred, inflamed, etc.) throughout your poem. They make a great impact on the reader.

I was surprised that each line was capitalized. For some reason, it distracted me a bit.

Excellent poem.
I found it interesting how you started with paragraph form and then went to poetic stanzas. It worked well. Good work.
You have an amazing ability to convey the working of the Holy Spirit in just a few words!