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07/13/06
An utterly fantastic read! Short, sweet and beautifully done. I loved it! And each "Me?" at the end of the paragraph GAVE this essay that extra "something" called magic. Great job!
07/14/06
Very, very nice. I almost clapped my hands. God Bless!
07/17/06
Knowing who you are and knowing who you aren't. Yes, what a wonderful message and what a fantastic job of making this point! Very well done!
07/17/06
From one who loves to worship, I loved this line,

find my place as my voice adds its notes to his worship.

Well done!
This piece is beautifully conceived and crafted--delicious to the spirit!

"Me?...A true son of Adam...adding notes to His worship." I love the way you subtly point to your identification with the whole Body of Christ.

"Neither unduly elevated nor unappreciated" captures the essence of humility's mysterious balance. A gem!
07/17/06
This is superb!
07/17/06
Yep. Ditto. You struck a chord with me on the last line. Terrific
I loved the way you brought it back to the personal at the end of each paragraph. The length of this piece was right for its genre: short and to the point. Hope to see more such entries from you in the future.