The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
It was a bit confusing when you used the phrase "you'll pray for me" - as I assume you are speaking of your Father In heaven...and He doesn't pray; however, heartfelt thoughts throughout.
07/14/06
I liked the clarity of your style. I found myself putting a melody to these words as I read. Good job and God Bless!
07/18/06
Sometimes the most profound messages are conveyed in the simplest ways. That's what you did here. I liked this piece. Nice work.
07/19/06
I thought of a song as well. Try putting it to music?? ;)