The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
So much truth in this story of how God takes care of us. My only suggestion would be to begin the story with something more spectacular that reaches out and grabs the reader...otherwise you might lose them before they get to the main course.
07/17/06
Very moving testimony in your last paragraph. Consider expanding that in story form.
07/19/06
I can relate to much of what you said. Watch for run-on sentences and be sure to put quotation marks around direct quotes. Keep working on your writing. Sharing from our hearts touches people!