The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
Enjoyed reading the account of how our Great God uses small things like a photo to open doors. I liked the fact that the couple saw this as an adventure and not as a duty. There was no anxiety but open hearts here. All 3 of the characters were open. Good job.
07/14/06
A very smooth and well written story. I liked the slow pace and simplicity of it. Isn't it great to see ourselves and hear God say He loves us at the same time. God Bless you.
I liked the atmosphere you create in this piece. It rings so true because it is so strange the way God works to open our hearts to his gospel. Good story. Thanks.
07/17/06
Great! (not an intended pun on the challenge topic!) The way a simple picture and the simple words "Jesus loves you" reached that woman was heartwarming.