The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
I like this! Very well written. I was a little confused, though, about the character. Wings and fists and people ... It seems contradictory. It can't be a bird. I'm torn between believing she is a fantasy character (a fairy, perhaps?) and a tribal figure (native american or african?). Other than that, I really enjoyed your writing. Your descriptions are vivid and your point made personal. Well done!
06/23/06
A very good piece of fantasy writing...thanks! It's something I admire greatly, never having mastered it. Good job.
06/23/06
An interesting story, I'm not sure if it was actually a bird (birds don't have fists), but a well told story. Good descriptions.
06/26/06
Very poetic in style. I thought first this was the personification of an eagle. A bit confusing at times. But, all in all, a good read.