The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
You've given us a wonderful picture of this man's new, simple life. The rhythm is so close to perfect, that I'd urge you to revisit this and "clean" it up a bit, metrically. This is a charming poem.
06/26/06
This is a poem of the heart, meant to be handled by the writer. A nice work overall.
06/27/06
A great story in poetic form; although a little long for MY taste, it was beautifully done and takes a great Wordsmith to put it together. You did just that... Thanks for sharing.
07/08/06
William - I just found this and I love it. It is absolutely magical! Thanks for making me smile. In His Love,

Julia