The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Love the opening question, but I can since your struggle to find the answers for the questions. Seems to be almost a devotional piece...
06/23/06
You did a good job of capturing the solemnity of shiloh. Consider re-writing this so that it's all in first person; the second person references are sometimes awkward. A serious and thought-provoking piece.
06/26/06
Yeah, our fatal flaw is belief that we have all the answers. Well written.