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06/22/06
The last sentence in this piece is a Death Sentence. My first thought was - "a little more love and a little less "ouch" might be a better way to touch the heart of a sinner Christians, of course, know these things; but love instead of threats might reach the heart of a sinner more; just a thought. Thank you for sharing your story.
06/23/06
What a wonderful pro-life statement! If you consider a re-write, take a look at pronouns. The plural pronouns seem awkward when you're writing about one baby at a time. In a piece like this, it's best to jest pick a gender and run with it.

This is a precious look at the gift of life.
06/26/06
Good solid statement. I like the way you weaved the scripture into the essay.